Tonight has but one purpose.
And that purpose? To sin.
I'll be your carnal cloak,
And wrap you in my sybaritic embrace.
I want to make you my sensual meal.
I'll trace my tongue up your lubricious lips,
Just to hear you moan and feel you twist.
Licking and sucking, as you wriggle and squirm.
My skin tingles as you tug at my hair,
While my lips caress yours, tongue delighting
In your warm sticky sweetness, as I hungrily sup
Upon the gasping moans escaping your pleading lips.
Then I'll inhale deeply one last time,
To imbibe your scent, and keep it in mind.
As I make my way up your tremulous form,
Tracing every curve with ravenous lips.
I'll whisper
"I want to please you until we both have our fill,
I'll tease you to enhance the thrill." as I begin to
Nibble on your ear and massage your moist zone
Letting your anticipation build, until I can taste it on your tongue.
Then I'll slide myself in, hands on your hips
Pulling myself into you; rhythmically thrusting
As you clench your fists into ecstatic vises,
Grasping the sheets as we treat our midnight vices.
What did you think
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whew
Is it hot in here or is it just me??? Very intense. I loved it of course!!!!
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this was intense.
i absolutely loved reading it! you have such talent! keep up the great work!
loved it!
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I liked this... it wasn't just erotica it was full of passion twinnie... wonderfully penned!
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FUCK!
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....I will not join the crowd and comment this.
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um... wow... i have one word... yummy
~Betrayals
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Utterly amazing, a thrill to read!
wow... um... O.O!!!! wow!!!! this is delightful and very detailed, you described this one very well. um... thank you and now i have to take a cold shower. lol! -lus
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you do not need to be going into the service it would twist poems like this to where no one would recognize your poetry anymore..
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Oooh La la!!
UhMayZeeeeeeng!!
I luff luff luffffed it.
Very sexy. And very playful.
I liked it much.
And this is how it should be. ;]
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teee riffic
*glances at my last comment* did i not applaud this? what was I thinking
the beginning reminded me of a line of a song by Brand New, "you can sin or spend the night all alone". i love this piece even more and I look forward to reading more of your work 
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great penmanship, sir.
even though I'm old enough to read this stuff, I've never read a poem under Erotica before >.< haha. to my surprise, i liked this poem the third stanza is my favorite 
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I'm glad i was the one to pop your erotica cherry, so to speak
this was actually my first attempt at erotica. i am glad you enjoyed it
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ooh, that is some sexy shit there cory
well done.
keep up the sexiful writes
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wow
wow I loved it! Very nice work!!!! Had me on the edge of my seat... hah. keep it up!
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Cory! You bad boy! I had no idea how sexy you could be! Fooled me, hehe. Damn, this is for women what hardcore pornography is to men...only more igniting and more creative
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Fucking smawesome!
ily CoryKins.
And this rocked my rainbow toe socks
bruddah boiii.
Lol.
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Hot too.
*sigh*
Me next?
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. . . dot dot dot....*sigh* as if the weather wasn't hot enough...damn
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Woah. Shiznit.
Seriously, you put Romeo to shame.
Come to think of it, you knock Casanova on his ass. XD
This is sexy, and just damn delicious. I rarely have seen any guy be able to describe exactly what they would to do someone, or put it into poetry, or even make it sound this fucking rad. XD
Love you Cory Bear!
Always
Emily
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I like it!!
One of the things that I liked about this was that it wasn't how shall I put it.....smutty. (can't think of a better word) It was enticing and enchanting! I really liked your word choice for it. Thanks for sharing it with me darlin!
Maggie 
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wow Cory, this was amazing.
the imagary was fantastic, i could just picture myself in this scene.
The flow was wonderful as well.
-Kelz ♥
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very well done dino! This was erotically sensual and very masculinely feminine. I love the flow and the way the words stir emotions only the body can recognize. Great write!
Panther
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Nice..
There's something so masculine and delicious about this. You do naughty very well. Great job Acid!!
~Gin
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