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Mid night rain(song)

The rain pours down and the tears start to flow
With you in the window you say your life is through
Tired of pain in this old motel
All you want is love as tears flown down

You stand there looking at your reflection
Crying and screaming about your rejection
The things that got you too this place of darkness
and the bruises that wont go away

                (Chorus)
Our kids scream in the middle of the night
Crying as he trys to take your kids lives
Saying we will be ok, I know your in pain
When we reach that place to dance in the rain

No place to go, no place to turn
Needing love but you always get burned
The kids are starving as you look out
Thinking about leaving him but your filled with doubt

          (Chorus)
Our kids scream in the middle of the night
Crying as he trys to take your kids lives
Saying we will be ok, I know your in pain
When we reach that place to dance in the rain

You see him again through bars and say
I love you but you caused so much pain
I want to be as free as the rain
If I stay with you I must be insane

Cant you see I am tired of all those days
When you hurt me and the kids in all those ways
The tears will stop flowing starting today
When I take our kids away

So ill never hear....

            (Chorus)
My kids scream in the middle of the night
Crying as he trys to take your kids lives
Saying we will be ok, I know your in pain
When we reach that place to dance in the rain



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  • You stand there looking at your reflection
    Crying and screaming about your rejection
    The things that got you too this place of darkness
    and the bruises that wont go away



    perfection in the form of words.


    x


  • carebear123
    June 20

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    oh i think this is my fav bc of the ending. its really sad all throughout but i love it how you took the same thing at the end in a different way. love that.

  • So deep and powerful I really enjoyed it I love it nice. Keep up the good work hun :

  • Beautiful

    Truly amazing. Well written, and well worded.


  • Tadd
    June 19
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    well writen

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