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Cringing And Happy

So confused with life
And i scared or am I alright
I think that I should just end my life
but I can't

I live life as fast I can
The pain hurts
so long
my friend

I am loved while I'm hated
I think things need to get
Situated..

I have you
That is all I need

You have me

or so it seems

 

Life can be so intimidating

But I'm happy

 

I am loved while I'm hated
I think things need to get
Situated..

I have you
That is all I need

You have me

or so it seems

 

Two! Three! Four! and end

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