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Your A.P Family

I would like to join your family
To be your niece perhaps?
I like rock music
And I wear baseball caps.

Pink and black
Purple and blue
These are some colours
I really like green too.

I tend to wear these colours
Bright and shocking they are
Did I mention
My dad drives a navy car?

I would like to join your family
My eyes are green and my hair is brown
I am five foot four
I tend to smile alot and rarely ever frown.

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Niece

A contest entry

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  • jahschosen
    June 30
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    well done

    the flow was great and the images excellent


  • spiritraven
    June 19

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    Soooo Nice

    Very well done indeed! Nice easy flow and good rhyme. Lots of good imagery and such descriptive words indeed... Welcome to my contest and my family