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Twilight Memories(Sonnet)

Moonlight brightening up the sky
As stars are sparkling within your eyes
Souls as mellow as the peaceful night
Giving hope, giving passion, giving power, giving might

Reflecting in the water, is her beautiful smile
Just that simple illusion has driven me wild
Wild about nature, the nature of her heart
That is more gorgeous than any picture ever painted by art

The breeze through the leaves just a joyous sound
like the very first day her voice I have found
Then suddenly emotions start flowing through my mind
Every moment near my ''cherri amoir'' is an endless memory in time

My life now revolves around the circle of love
Compares to the beauty of a the whitest owl or of a snow white dove



Author notes

Wow I think i actually have to thank the one who uploaded this pic... it truly inspired me. now i feel revealed and refreshed and please keep this coming at me

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  • penman gold member
    June 21
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Macsword
    June 19

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    Good write poet...

    truly inspired and an awakening of the heart.

    but poet: your font...red against blue....is an eye killer, at least for me.


  • awitersheart
    June 19

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    Captivated

    Enchanted I like this and in your notes I think you best described everything this is beautiful and I just love it.
    Good luck in the contest.


    • sykotic
      June 25
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      Thanks!!!

      Thanks a lot for the heads up on the color scheme for this poem, when i read it again it had the same affect on me...

      let me know how i can return the favour

      yours sincerely

      jade