Your vibrant colors haven painted the oceans
Such majesties have graced the skies
Emotions are defined with your pigment
Your the shades of my lover's eyes
Calmness overcomes me when your present
Relaxation consumes me
I drift off into exquisite dream lands
weightless and free
Author notes
BLUE!!
Contest Write
I tried lol
Written June 19, 2009
In a list
A contest entry
- Write Me a Color by Concrete Angel.
550 points, ended June 26, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I seek honest opinions and helpful criticism. :)
Comments
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Thanks for adding the color to the author notes!
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This is soothing and relaxing with a very fluid rhythm. Was your color blue? That is what I'm getting for this piece. Don't forget to note the color you wrote about in your author notes! That is a rule and will lead to a disqualification (I don't want to do that to anyone) if you don't add it so I can be positive of the color
This is really lovely, I could feel the drifting
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