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My Torment

As I opened my eyes to yet another painful day,
I realize that these walls won't heal this pain.

Everyday I am tormented by chains sticks and fire,
Trying to make this worn down body feel something.

People pass me by not noticing my inner pain,
they think life's a peach and nothing can go wrong.

Now that i think about it...I used to be like that,
until everything went horribly wrong.

So now i sit in the middle of four walls wondering how i can change,
but realizes that i'm to far gone so any help now would be pointless.

This torment is unique,
And people just don't understand it.

A contest entry

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  • Kira65
    June 19
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    I love it and i can completely relate to it, sadly


  • DistilledGin
    June 19

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    Painful

    Sometimes I feel like this, but then I look at my life through someone else's perspective, and it makes me feel better. There was alot of pain in this write. Keep it up! And good luck in my contest!

    ~Gin