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The NEW Burning Heat Wave

The Sun,
heated up the bleachers,
hotter than the fans could take.

One by one the fans sat,
...first the sizzle, ...then smoke,
...another fan would choke.

They rippled as they burned
You remember them burning and screaming,
I remember them as the"Burning  Heat Wave.










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  • Connor Blackbird
    June 19
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    exceeds 50 word limit


    • hitthispuppy
      June 19
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      correct

      thanks for counting for me, i had dress shoes on and could n't untie them. here's to learning 50 - 100 for next weeks quiz. lol