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It's gotta be wrong for me to want someone so much.
It's gotta be insane for me to stick around.
It's gotta be bad that I still let your image seep into my brain.
It's gotta be a mistake to let your stay in my heart.
But I can't help it.
I'm not always right,
I'm not sane.
I can't always be good,
And I've got to make mistakes.
Some things, I don't want to change.

The poem is lost, yet hopeful. Did it make you question anything?

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