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Key To You

i will share the air i breath
and but my heart on a string,
your eyes is the ever lasting peace
in which i believe is the forever in my heart,
time is all i need to prove my love for you.


with ever apearence of you it is locked in my eyes,
your are an angel,
in which lies on my deathbed calling my name,
but with every breath i take,
every step i take,
reminds me of you,
so if death must be my key to you,
let it be.

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i dont have to say who its for, unless u ask

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  • Dont Lose THE ONE
    June 19

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    This is a great poem!!! It's deep so only a hand full of people will get it.. Lol.. It's realli unique! The only thing I would say is check ur spelling.. Nice Job

  • mozartvivaldi
    June 19
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    is nice, a little deep but great