floating downriver
my eyes a papery boat
this journey is long
Author notes
picture inspired;taken by linda
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2450/623.jpg?1245426377
Zen Poetry
5-7-5 traditional Haiku
In a list
A contest entry
- nature~haiku by misticmoonlite.
950 points, ended June 22, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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the journey down the river all delends on fast you are moving...
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lol nice
entry here malabu, you penned this beautifully, thank you for this addition to my contest, good luck
Linda -
excellent
You are always so good at haikus my lil hunk
Love this one
Best of luck in the contest
I may enter this one
Love ya and come by and read my new one
Hugs
Your sweetie pie
Susan~~~
P S I have lost your phone number please re send it okay??????
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Beautiful write. wonderful imagery expressed in this piece.
The papery boat reminds me of playing with toy sailboats as a kid. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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I see
and yes can do the paper boat thing, and you know I would be like a kid again, thank you for sharing and entering this contest
Good luck too.
Linda
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This is a well written haiku that does the pic justice and makes me wish that's what I was doing this very minute.
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so serene...thoughts travel with eyes delight
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Indeed~
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