Tossed at me
Casually
Ripping apart a dream
That never even
Began
A sinking feeling
Rises
I believe in myself
Less
Maybe the words are true?
I drown
In silence
What did you think
Comments
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Wow
I don't usually like poems like this, but I like this alot. For it does not confuse me. I love the imagery, and the rhythm of the poem. Great job!!
~Gin
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this is GREAT
so much said here,,, in soooo few words,,, well done,,,thanks for sharing
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