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The Mountin where I Lay...

There I lay,
Alone and cold,
No one to hold,
No one visit me,
I'm Completly out of reach,
In the mountins.

As thunder strikes,
And the wind howls,
I curl up into a ball,
To keep myself warm,
Adn hope for a better life,
In another world.

No one knows me,
I am a shadow in the darkness,
Creeping up behind you,
I whisper to you in your sleep,
Help is what I call for,
Your Scream echoes across the hall.

When you go to the mountins,
And look into the sky,
I will be there,
Wacthing your every move,
So watch out!

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 14

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    this is really nice..i mean its dark and really swallows te reader into your feelings. keep writing, and take care
    Stephanie ♥