May I taste your perfect roses?
perfume scent dancing up my spine
while passion builds in my eyes
at the vision so splendid, divine.
A hopeful breath whispers out
from the gates of my very chest
while I watch the night strands dance
every moment I consider blessed.
Love expressed with never a blink
while I hold you closely entwined
the tremble in the motor running
begs those roses to be mine.
Finally they grow closer still
warmed by the sunshine’s crest
of bright emotions from my core
as my own lips to hers gently rest.
A contest entry
- Write A Love Poem by Borntowriteforever.
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Comments
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Very nice write, Sir. Congrats on the gold.
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One of few love poems that have really touched me.
Incredible work, welcome to the finalists list.
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yes!
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Yes
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Aw...
...this is so... sensually sweet. I love it! It all just flows so nicely and the words are beautifully chosen. Look what you've done, I'm at a loss for what to say! Just know that this is a lovely, wonderful poem. Very innocent and sweet, and I'm in love with the metaphor.
Amazing!
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Yes
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This is incredibly sweet. I enjoyed the emotion put behind every word & the subtle imagery played out. Thanks for sharing ♥
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Thanks for the correction!
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What a great write! How well you portray how you feel here. Its quite a feeling, to be anticipating yet still just thankful for every second. Loved it =)
I'm out of points, otherwise I'd give you three applause! -
Oh so beautiful hun, you capture love the way it should be, without the pain. Oh how I long for moments like this back. Perfect. Best to you in the contest
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Tender and trembling beauty, this sent a quiet little shiver down my spine. Keep it up. :
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Judge's comment
my heart was skipping and pounding. I really enjoyed this poem. thanks for entering and good luck -
wow, this was stunning, I feel my heart skipping beats.
remarkable.
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