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The Puzzle




A teen love in your soul,
hope for the very young,
yearning is like as fulness
in skin, an irreverent sense.

So sure that everything can be
the whim at your fingertips ,
as sidekick, friend, big brother
want to reclaim their passions.

Don’t be overcome by shyness,
you know, your kiss’s freshness,
match with all the tenderness
in a frank venturing placidity.

It’s the day for an un-annoyance,
right moment of the glorious excitement,
a perplexion of someone has deciphered
your love beats, for this puzzling  astonishment.











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  • penman gold member
    June 19
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    Excellent

    A wonderful creation. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.