Discovering the stars in the desert sky
Essential to finding your way and is why
Sensual thoughts come your way
Enter into your parlay
Rendering timeless and endless moments
Tantalizing the senses increments …
Nocturnal you become when you feel the heat
Ignites the sun light of an oven complete
Glowing are the long nights with a purple wave
Hiding among the saguaro to portray
Titillating songs of the wind through the sand
Singing of what once was the green and golden land.
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The desert can be so beautiful but so cruel too. A very nice piece you have written here.
Sheila
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Well done acrostic
very descriptive. The rhyme is neatly paced. Good write poet.
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I loved the imagery used. I can actually imagine the whole picture. The stars ans the sand and the winds and their songs.
Also the flow is great. It's beautifully rhymed.
Thanks for entering.
-Swati
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Yes, absolutely beautiful piece of poetry!
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absoutely beautiful. An acrostic I did not see until the end. Seems I do that alot. This write is clear and cold-a desert night. Have to shut the windows before dawn or you'll freeze.
I wish you all the best in your contest.
Love,
jin
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