Jasmine is the color of my eyes and the scent of my flower
Utopia is my philosophy and my inner power
Labial is the articulation of my inner diction
Invincible to you or your conniving cold, contradiction
Aspirant of complete ecstasy of the innocent divine
Entering mine own world gracefully in four-four time
Laughing at your inability of peace to find.
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Inspired by image julia, el by ~vuda on deviantART
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Good use of assonance here and strong word choice.
You have painted her with hard color - perhaps a mirror of what love has been. Sadness shines here.
good work
ken

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Thank you for the bunny ears
AND for commenting on my work!
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Nice play on words here.
Enjoyed this well done.
Delila





