Age of purity and innocence,
this time of change
meets a blooming maturity
Fulfilling form, stylising figure;
nature produces fine specimen
A time to play with hair and fashion
To perfect beauty,
applying make-up and perfumes
Bringing forth fresh radiance
Changing mood and attitude
A young lady, pleasing to the eye
stands before mankind
A budding beauty
ready to take on new life style
To seek, settle, nurture,
or give her all to career
Go-getter or jet-setter
her presence is felt near
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I love the beginning.
maybe break in into stanzas, so it can be better read eaiser...thats just a suggustion. -
the beginning was strong as you embraced your inner being...the middle spoke of your outer beauty...the ending showed vulnerability and exudes strength at the same time...A perfect description for the complexities that make up the whole of who you are!! great job! keep up the writing. Peace and light always in ALL wyas, KP
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