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marie louise

Missing image
hung by ribbons in mother's wedding dress,
napolean's answer to josephine's jealousy.
freckles and age spots never did align
with guillotine smiles...


...from such great heights.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    June 19

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    I love this poem, especially because Marie-Louise is my friend's name Gorgeous write, & good luck


  • perfectsunset gold member
    June 19

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    Ooh wow this was so
    wonderfully penned and
    very abstract!

    I like the format as well

    Best wishes in the contest


  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    June 19
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    great take on the prompt. liked it very much. good luck.


  • CentrifugalCorpse
    June 19

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    Well-penned.
    I like the imagery in this. Though very simple vocabulary, this is a good poem & an interesting take on the prompt.

    Thanks for sharing this piece & good luck!

    En sielua