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The fucked up side of me

There's a reason why I'm pushing you away
Why I am ignoring you and I never wanna play
These games anymore, you called me a whore
I can't say that it made me feel good
Though you gave me attention that you should
All day and all night I'm just trying to fight
Off every single demon thats coming, thats right
I'm strong, independent, though promiscuous inside
I know why still I'm trying to hide and get by
Tired having my fists up watching my back
I try so hard but I'm always off track


Selfish, complaining
I heard you weren't staying


Instead of blaming you I always blamed myself
Stop looking at me, cause you can only blame yourself
Battling with these emotions, like always
Running down these emotions like hallways
Can’t it just stop, I just want to breathe
I’m losing my mind from the things I seethe

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22. The fucked up side of me

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  • robena
    July 13
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    great way to show your reader how you feel.i can relate well done!


  • Sophie Said
    July 7

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    I think everyone can relate to this poem at some time or another. It is important you always do what is best for yourself and not someone else. Your rhyming was not forced, and fit pretty well through everything. Good write.♥


  • SallytheRagdoll
    July 2

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    Great write!

    I love it, it's very straight forward with lots of emotion and power behind every word. you let the reader know what you are feeling!


  • moluv10
    July 1
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    very nice write. i love your rhyming. deep subject you have addressed as well. I really like this.


    • Starretta
      July 1
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      Thank you very much. I try to work on rhyming sometimes because I hate forced rhyme and I feel I might do that so I work on it! Thankx for the comment!


  • Tzipora
    June 23

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    Welldone

    it was beautiful and powerful. as if you wanted to scream the whole thing but in a way were to afraid.

    -good write.


  • individuality gold member
    June 22

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    a good poem, ah yeah, it gets tedious at times, to always have to have your guard up, and fists at the ready, to pummel any that scream around you.

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