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the Question:(Reality or Fiction)

The love I have seems unreal. This thing they call love, is it a feeling, or a gift? What I have in my heart lies dormant and unshaken. Is it a feeling, or is it a gift? Love, is it really real? Can it happen and make you loose control? Or is that a myth, or old folks tale handed down from generation to generation? Can this love be brought from one heart to another? Or is it some epidemic spread world wide? What is love really? Is it a dream, or is it fairytale stuff?  Who would know what love really is? Do you know?; Can you clearly say what love really means?

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  • lesbian-in-love
    October 15

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    This was well written and very enjoyable to read. I liked it. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest. Keep up the good work!


  • forbidden-colour
    August 10

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    A good piece, I feel that you could benefit from a better front and a form of layout, it would certainly help your reader understand what you're trying to express.
    Thank you for entering.
    Sophie


  • Unbreakable3
    July 21

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    This is nice, great quetsions you asked, you are pretty good at prose, I only ever wrote one prose, and i don't even really know how good i did becasue i didn't get many reads on it! It was called his hands and,,, any way thank you for entering!