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Kissing


it's amazing that a kiss from the right person can lighten your senses

I do too belive that a kiss can be a pathway to a door that can open up what
a relationship can handle and should it go to another level

and even though it was brief it very special

i love how u said that u played it over and over in your mind reliving the moment
that one magnificent moment

tell me how does it feel to to have a kiss like that

the way you describe the kiss you was in love

how does it feel to be in love

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  • graydeth
    June 19
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    Thank you for entering. I wasnt sure if this was a comment on my poem or your poetic response.