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All is fair in love in war

All is fair in love in war
And baby this is love

An ash tray  full of cigarette buts
And empty on the floor

Late nights walking
Early morning sleep ins
Baby this just might be love

Hold me tighter
And kiss me madly truly deeply
All is fair in love and war

You paint my nails
And I’ll sooth your soul

We’ve all made some mistakes
But Oh baby this is love

I’ll make you pancakes in my underwear
If you promise to never change
Cuz’ all is fair in love in war

Time moves so slowly
You mean the world to me
Yes, this is love

All is fair in love and war
And baby this is love

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  • XxTwigxX
    June 18
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    Pretti ;)

    I like the emotion in this piece, and the repetitive concept.. very nice poet.


  • cLaSsiX
    June 18

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    gah.... this one hurts to read.... certain things remind me of me and my ex...................... but its such a good write. you can feel your honesty and your heart in the poem.

    very good piece.