Days fly by ,lost on white lines, rhyms with false promises ..of far better times.
I dont know why I tried it..yet I did.. belived in it ..had to taste the A grade
The White Angel of death ..
Now I find what is ..is not ..and what was to be ..will never be the same.. for me and thine.
Once I had you deep in my veins , like a transit on the trains.. i was addicted to your sin
You owned me .. all or nothing.
You got me down on my knees beging for more than I could pay for,
Like a whore in a market place , you gave it to me for free , to keep me happy,
I used you .. abused you ..sold my soul for a hit or two .. swore my legiance to the devil,
Just for the rush of the moment ..the thrill of the kill.. Abondoment.
Yes i would die for it ...needed it like the earth needs the sun to shine.
I loved how you moved my soul from cold to boilinig hot ..Is that not.. love.
You sent me crazy , wrapped in this world of hazy .. chasing fools dreams and schemes
Up dead end streets with blind bends.. unseen ends of broken beds.
You left me wanting more .. more ..anything to please the emptyness ,
I confess i cut and dealed the rest you gave me, just so i could have better.
Could not get enough of you.. tried to but nothing was left,
I cried .. attempted suicide died.. once or twice ..my life worth less than a penny,
Now I lie here in the hollow hopelessness of addicition with too many nights
Too many days.. wasted away ...on too many lies and white lines .
Author notes
the addictions are the drug and the Love
A contest entry
- Be The First Page In The Book For CHANCE (CONTEST ON RECOVERY FROM DRUG ADDICTION AND RECOVERY) by Viyanna Rosemarie.
1500 points, ended June 30, 25 entries
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beautiful words n sorrowful meaning. its true what u day that the addictions are the drug and the love.
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i love it....especially since i can relate...
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POWERFUL..
A very twisted and dark place you went to..the imagery you use here is stellar my friend, i felt as if i were watching you from off to the side, yet even trying to warn you of the dangers you just let the warnings fall to the wayside..this is stunningly penned...
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cxheers to you swan yeah drugs are bad dont use them or youll end up like me lol hell mate its not real i only choof not into heavy stuff coke not heavy is it i boght a can yesterday coz they was out of pepsi and it did nuthing ripped off again the mesage is so true and so are the images hope it scares the hell out of some kid so they change their minds bout doing it great comment always from you glenn
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WOW!!
This was deep.Although I have never been addicted to any type of harsh drug,I know many of my loved ones that are..And it's very hard to see them go through these same things as you have described..Even painful at times..Some people resort to drugs as a security blanket as if it will help them sort out their problems like it will take away lifes problems but in reality it's only making it worse.When you get that high the problem seems to fade away but eventually the goes disappeas,and when you come down off that high,your problem will still be there staring you right in the face.Many people don't realize this and soon they get addicted and then it's too late.
I've seen too many loved ones go down the drain over some type of harsh addiction..It breaks my heart when you can't even help 'em when they don't want to be helped..Phew anyway I'm rambling on,very powerful piece ,sweetie!
Love,Mandi
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big comment there my love lol its just a poem im as clean as you and only weed to i participate in i just have a vivid imagination . great to get such a show of emotion tho and ive known many to die with the needle or the deal gone wrong drugs heavy drugs are bad. peace and mighty love to you gal
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there are several spelling, punctuation and capitalization errors in here that need to be fixed. and may i remind you that since you entered an addiction write you must also enter a write on recovery to be eligible for the trophies offered. thank you for entering and i wish you the best of luck. viyanna rosemarie
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thanks for the chance to spew this out i know im not too flash with proper english and grammer but just wanted to air this poem as its raw and has a message or 2 cheers to you glenn also did recovery thanks for having this comp.
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