I can't begin to explain the agony that tears into my chest
For your comprehension is immaculate
You can't understand such distress...
God can break into your darkness
He has filtered into my sorrow
Yet my tears haven't been dried
He hasn't promised tomorrow
So screw you bastards
I hope you all burn in hell
To make this a peaceful world
You fuckers have failed.
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fuckin love it
it serious its real it magnificent. fav part is Yet my tears haven't been dried
He hasn't promised tomorrow.....sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.
stop trying to be like daddy
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Poems that give off such an angry vibe always win me over. So five stars. I love it.
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I thought the last two lines were kind of awkward, but overall it was a decent enough piece. I think you'd really enjoy reading Individuality, here on AP. Thanks for coming by earlier ansd reading 'a season of surrender'
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Wow this is really good, angry writes always seem to fasinate me (:
I can relate, great work
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Thanks
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"for your comprehension is immaculate"
should it be "for all your comprehension is immaculate"?
or am i reading the poem wrong.
other than that. amazing. well written -
very interesting. i really like it. you fucker. ha, i love that word. well done.
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such angst. I can relate.
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