You hear your name in the distant future
Wedding bells, dresses, I wont hurt you
I want to tell you that I love you
When you cry ill be the one to hold you tight
I will hold you tight and never let go
Sit up with you in the middle of the night
No cares in the world no tears in your eyes
Dont feel the pain thats deep inside
(chorus)
Ill be the one who will take your hand
The one who will hold you in the rain
The one who will protect you through the pain
Ill be your one
Because you will never give me a chance
Never hold me tight, No i love yous
NO sweet honey due kisses
Because you wont let me be the one
How can I forget you
Never to exspress my love for you
I see you suffer and i want to be the one
The one to....
(chorus)
Ill be the one who will take your hand
The one who will hold you in the rain
The one who will protect you through the pain
Ill be your one
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This is so amazing. I can't even describe it.
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ish alright
not really my style, but content wise it's not bad I can dig the whole 'bittersweet, I'm so in love with you but you'll never see me'. Like I said, not my style but I dug it. Good job
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It is a good song....I would say with one of the previous commenters that Because written in here in chorus and verse puts off the meter of the flow...Otherwise It is a good bittersweet song..Keep penning!


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Awh this is beautiful :]


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awesome


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forgot smiliesss


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love the words, style and direction
the feel of the music is easy
touched by it
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WOW...i love this i can see this bing an amazing song, you have a ral talent for this. Keep writing you are beyond wonderful!!!!much <3...clammy aka Scars.
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Nick....I...I don't even know what to say...It's...AMAZING...I don't even desrve to READ something like this...


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see now whoever said you cant write is full of shit. i love this and i think its amazing. very sad bc i know the truth behind it but like i like how you write. i like how you mean everything when you write it. i think its evil that some ppl dont feel the same. i just think this poem is amazing as r u! =) nice write hun! <3


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I really love this song nick it almost made me cry
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This... is amazing. Wow it's so beautiful. I think this is one of my very favourites. I cannot write songs
I have tried. But this is really beautiful
keep writing my awesome yucky 
I lov u!
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moonlight vampire
oh my gosh i love this song i didn't know u right lyrics ur amazing and gifted. u have a lot of talent
keep being inspired to write poems and lyric
ur always,
angel
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