H eather was a Winner
E ver she showed herself true,
A midst such adversity
T hat she outshined and slew.
H er life was a blessing to many
E ach blessed by the wise lead given,
R ejoicing her way up to heaven.
W e can not begin to recount
E ach aspect that made her great,
A nd stood out in her life
T hat we now come to celebrate
H ow she accomplished so much
E nduring with a positive mind,
R eminds us that we can so do
E xcellence in life we can find
D etermined to let Love shine through.
T his is her legacy,
H ow wonderfully in her we see,
E ndurance a triumph can be!
S o let her be honored today
T o be a true Blessing indeed,
O ur lives she has blessed with Hope
R esilient through life's greatest needs
M ay we her life Message, well heed!
A contest entry
- A Tribute To Heather. by SimplyNoodle.
4100 points, ended August 3, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
point out misspellings or things I can improve upon in a kind and friendly way--THANKS!
Comments
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Wow, this is very lovley. I love the way you made it flow, and I love the format of this poem. I also love the choice of words as well.
I can not help you with spelling because I my self em not good at spelling at all. But it looks fine to me, I dont know how good that will be coming from me. Lolz.
Id only like to ask for one more thing, purhapes could you put some credit towards wherever the picture was found in your author notes maybe?
But other then that Ireally did enjoy this pieace. and will proubly re-read it many times. but Ido applogize for the late timing of this comment. I should of gotten it done much sooner. Well good luck in the contest and keep writting.
Thank you,
Chelsey.
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