Winters breath chills bones
a love grown suddenly cold
we learn to build an Igloo
The sunshine of spring
new love, fresh hope, a vision
a long missed warmth has returned
Author notes
I don't think i have written one of these before. 
Sedoka
The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following
syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the
same subject from differing perspectives.
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt: Five Poetic Forms II by Manda Kathryn.
1000 points, ended July 1, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Really, give me your opinion!
Comments
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Thank You for Your Entry ~
Side note: I thought my monitor was dusty before I realised it was the background
What a lovely Sedoka I think you've done beautifully for your first ever one; it shows how it can feel to express new love and warmth
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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Its always good when one has a new love
congrats and best of luck in the contest.
Love you
Passions
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