Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

SAVING ME (acrostic)

D id you catch my tears?
I know you tried your best.
D id you wash away my fears?
    (yes)

Y ou were always there.
O h and you always cared.
U ndeniably the perfect friend.
(and I promise I'm yours til' the end)

C ould you have done better?
A nd you couldn't have.
T o you should I give myself forever?
C losing and re-opening my heart.
H how could you love me like you do?
  (we both know you shouldn't)

M y own stupidity was over ruled.
E every time I saw you.
  (I love you more each day)

W hy do you like me so much?
H ave you ever let me down? no.
E ven longed for my touch? yes.
N o more does what I say go.
  (so lay me to rest)

I am so sorry that I fell.
  (I really didn't mean to)

F ell right into my own hell.
E ven you pulled me out of that.
L oving me like it wasnt a big deal
L iking the fact I healed
? was I enough for you?
  (I must have been cuz...)

YOU
EVEN
SAVED ME!

comment me & I'll comment u back!!!

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)