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Dont cry for me

Wipe your eyes. Don't cry for me,
My love will always remain.
I'm in a sunny, happy place,
No sadness and no pain.

Please don't mourn or weep for me,
For I am in eternal rest.
Rejoice my life, happy and sad,
Remember me at my best.

Look upon the stars and think of me,
I'll always be watching over you,
You''ll feel me with each memory
For I am a part of you.

When you are down remember me,
Wash your tears away with love,
One day we'll be together once more
'Til then I'll watch over you from above.

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  • Midnite wolf gold member
    August 13
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    wow, i love it, a wonderful peaceful write, offering comfort, wonderful peace


  • little miss sad
    August 11

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    i love it, it reminds me of this book i read, its called kissed by an angel, this is really good, if u like stuff like your poem you should read the book, good job, send me a message if you want me to read anymore


  • Amia Aesthetic
    August 11

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    This was beautiful touching, duckie.
    The emotions were amazingly detailed.

    This is my favorite part:

    You''ll feel me with each memory


  • lowbrass
    August 11

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    good writing

    I love the emotion you put into this poem, and i can tell that it's real because it made me sad just reading it.

    One thing that I find helps with flow is to find ways to say the same thing in a different number of syllables; like if you had stay rather than remain in the second line. I know it's not the same word but it could ease the flow a bit.

    If and however you revise, don't lose any of the emotion, I think that should always come first in a poem like this.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 11

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    Aww, this is beautiful. I bet the person you wrote this for very much appreciates this wonderful write. Thank you for sharing

    x


  • chanzcesr
    June 23

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    Thanks Sweetie!

    This is a very touching and moving poem that could only be written by someone who has lost a loved one. I know you have sweetie and appreciate your very moving insight. xxxxx


  • hugh wyles silver member
    June 19

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    Dear Grand-daughter #1.

    This is a touchingly insightful poem which says those things we would like to hear from our loved ones who have departed. We hope that, wherever they are, they are happy, free from care, pain and stress.
    We, who are left, miss them and therefore mourn for them but Christian teaching gives us faith that we shall all come together in time. This faith, our love for them, which does not die, and our fond memories of their lives, should overcome our grief at their passing.
    I am sorry to learn from Aunty Joan that Todd has 'lost' his father and I am sure that your words will bring him comfort.
    Please know that, when my time comes, these are words which I would want to have said to you.
    Applause, much love, hugs and XXX's, Grampa.


  • angelica silver member
    June 18

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    Beautiful Mia, I'm so sorry to hear Of Todd's Dad losing his battle last night. He is at peace now and free from pain.
    Todd will find great comfort in your words.
    Love AJ


  • Lies4Truth
    June 18

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    So very sweet it is as if someone who is dieing is trying to console the person who has to live very sweet and very good job

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