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Dance with the Faeries

The faeries come at evening light,
the little ones that dance at night.
The magic spells play in my mind,
when love and motion is combined.

When little elves are in my sight,
the faeries come at evening light.
They dance around and cause no harm;
these dancing creatures have a charm.

The evil ones are unaware;
they’ll never catch them in their snare.
The faeries come at evening light
and play their music so contrite.

If you believe then you will see,
it happens Oh so magically.
So come and dance with them tonight,
the faeries come at evening light.

 

 

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  • cfehl11
    July 22
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    Very whimsical. This is a form I would be interested in trying in the future, thank you for the wonderful introduction to the Qua tern!


  • Titus gold member
    July 15

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    So simply was this felt it was almost melting into the incomplicated arena of Amera's to sole tangle with the cmplex thoghts of Titus to unmangle, really good to see how easy it can be done, lovely work, simplicity is bliss,

  • Wonderful...


    "Dance with the Faeries" sings beautifully.

    It is a poetic grand feast... "Dance with the Faeries" glows.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

  • Thank You for Your Entry ~

    What a beautifully soft, light Quatern Certainly brightened up my afternoon reading such enchanting imagery

    Best of Luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • Eusebius
    July 1

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    Most enchanting! A wonderfully evocative poem, lyrical and lulling... I absolutely loved it, loved it!!

  • I love this poem. You captured me with your fairys! You have lots of talent! Keep it up!


  • Desire gold member
    June 22

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    Wowzers~

    Oy ! Teach me how to write Beautiful
    I drop jaw each time I read Your forms~
    They are beyond Inspiring~ Bravo!!!
    Woot! and You bring the Faeries tooo
    Excellent~~~~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~

  • Beautifully written! Thank you...

  • Enchanting! I do believe in Faeries, I do, I DO!


  • Firequeen
    June 20

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    Oh my
    this is so light and airy
    It drew me in like the wonderful scent of the sweetest flower.
    You always amaze me with your talent.
    keep the ink flowing my friend
    Fire


  • PerVirtuous
    June 20

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    Nothing like a fairy dance to start your day. You have always been good with the Quartern. This is another flawless example.


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    June 19
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  • SteveS gold member
    June 19
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    A fine poem! Cute and magical.

  • montez gold member
    June 19
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    Nicely constructed...

    ...quatern, but rather "inane" for me (if you'll forgive the expression!)
    Robin.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 18

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    Take me there so I can dance
    with you and faeries I willl prance.
    You bring joy with your poetic line,
    wish I'd thought to make you mine.

    BEautifully done.

  • Wonderfully penned. A faerie world that only you can pen with such skill. Best of luck with this one in the contest although, I think, as always, you shot and hit target.

    Well done. Good luck

    Passionspromise


    • Amera gold member
      June 19
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      Why thank you so much I'm surprised you read one of my poems.
      The love has never left,
      Amera♥


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 18

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    There was a whole party of elves and fairies going into the zoo as I left tonight, I told them to make sure they saw they went to see the dragons

    Another masterly execution of the form, superb stuff

    Jeff


  • melphleg gold member
    June 18

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    Frustrated at work. So it was nice to take a brief mental break and read something light.
    As always, you do excellent with the form and rhymes. You made good use of the repeating line.


  • HaleyMary
    June 18

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    Beautiful write, Sis. Wonderful flow and excellent imagery.
    The elves and fairies give the poem a magical feeling. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

  • Awe.. the magic is in the air. There is something about summer that gets the fantasy writes going. Excellent rhythm and flow here.  

     

     


    Delila


  • azlyn gold member
    June 18
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    Most enchanting!!!


  • pranj
    June 18

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    MAGICAL

    Fantastic fantasy! WOW! Great word use!
    lovely last lines -
    If you believe than you will see,
    it happens Oh so magically.
    So come and dance with them tonight,
    the faeries come at evening light.

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