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Just Another Sonnet

I don't know whether to throw back my head
And laugh hysterically or turn and cry.
The passion and the pain are still not dead.
It hurts too much to feel so I'll just sigh
And go about my life. There's still so much
I wish to say and wish I hadn't said.
But I can not permit myself to touch
The surface of what nearly left me dead...

So take this as you will or not at all.
I don't know why you ever fell for me
Or I for you. A stupid judgement call?
A stupid love that turned to misery.
I just. I just. I don't know what to say.
I just wish things had not turned out this way.

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  • Tqop
    October 12
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    Another sour relationship. This seemed to mean a lot to you. You really relayed your feelings. Nice job.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 12

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    I liked your voice stated in poetry
    and the feelings of sadness left only to reel from

    Thank you and best wishes
    Julie


  • mixedfeelings
    June 22

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    i definitely know this feelings. i really like "So take this as you will or not at all. I don't know why you ever fell for me Or I for you. A stupid judgement call?" great poem!


  • Midnite-Rae
    June 18

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    This was really sad. But I'm sur emany people can relate to this. You did a good job with this. I've never written this type of sonnet before, but I think I might try. I could feel the emotion in this. Keep up the great work.