Earth

She scribbles the skies
with bold strokes of
nature's secrets, for
everyone to smile upon
her forbidden fruit.

It seemed only right for
her reign above the earth
to be tainted with a love
unwanted by the heavens,
poured down on the

creatures to live on

& they regard her as an
angel, to bring upon a
painful resignation to those
who take advantage of her
false securities.

Author notes

picture prompt

A contest entry

PIF Picture Prompt - Quickie by fortyninereasons. 1150 points, ended June 29, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Draig aine
June 21

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congradulations on the Greenie
what a great line, she scribbles the skies
followed by a very strong write

she scribbles the skies
with bold strokes of
nature's secrets, for
everyone to smile upon
her forbidden fruit.

bright blessings
fortyninereasons
June 19

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I am not a fan of using '&' in a poem, especially at the beginning of the last stanza. I think 'and' would be more aesthetically pleasing to the eye.
Thank you for your entry.
Juls
Samantha Marie
June 19
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wow... this is beautiful...
i'm speechless this was so amazing.
wonderfully penned <3