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Heal

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Once again, she is there, I swear;
She’s sitting, with that ‘door knob’ stare.
When I come slowly down the hall
she couldn’t care less ‘bout me at all.

Little she knows of the pain I’m in
and she acts like caring for me’s a sin.
Near the front door there’s keys beneath
a shelf, dusty collar, and leash.

Just dying to hear “Wanna go out?”
But my heart’s full of fear, trembling, doubt.
Confused? I know; no one’s ever hit you.
All you are is a cute ‘lil Shih Tzu. 

Some day, I promise you’ll chase me,
Vikki Mango Bongo Gracie
(deep breath) Roadkill Santori Rose.
I’ll give you my love ...I suppose.





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#86 - "I don’t care what you think as long as its about me."

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  • butterflywriter
    August 20
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    this is adorable...

    sorry I missed it, lol, probably because we were on our way to NYC

  • Purrsanthema
    July 19
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    What a lovely poem you wrote for Jenny's dog, the pup with the extravagant name.

  • ecrivain01
    July 17

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    LOl ...

    this is clever.

    I had a neighbor once who had a dog that barked 24/7 and it nearly drove me bonkers. Then a family of Vietnamese moved in next door to me. Within a couple of days, the dog disappeared.

    Funny thing. I didn't miss it at all.

    • paulcreates silver member
      July 17

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      Thank you for stopping by Jim. I once lived next to a townhouse that had one of those basset hounds. The lady owner lived alone and as soon as she's go to work that thing would let out the most mournful howls over and over again until she came home again. About drove me nuts! I mentioned it to her but she didn't really believe me until I actually recorded the dog and played it back to her. lol Oh I was glad when we moved from there.

      Paul


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    June 20

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    "sitting with that door knob stare'" - too too good.
    Very clever and truly real.
    Loved this. ~Pamela


  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    June 20
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    My dog liked it.


  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    June 19
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    I loved that! It was so great.


  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    June 19
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    Lol, that was amazing. I loved that. Thanks Paul, I'll show that to my dog later.


  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    June 18
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    86. I don’t care what you think as long as its about me

    Have fun.


  • butterflywriter
    June 18
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    good morning cowboy

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