What hate gains
Love can tame
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yes, very true
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I like this love conquers all ..yes
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Nice thought......
perhaps someone should organise a world-wide love-in with Mr b Ladin! -
simplicity but this a mystery
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I love the simplicity of this-it really depicts what love should be and has a really innocent feel to it. I also thought the the choice of making "what hate gains" as very definite-whereas leaving "love can tame" as ambiguous gave a different slant here too. Very clever and insightful write for such a very short poem. Well done, and good luck in your contests
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How true.
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Within a small amount of words, you have painted that love can overcome hate. Best of luck to you with this in the contest held by Ted E. Bare.
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I truly like this. Just goes to demonstrate that good over evil can happen just like love can conquer hate. I want to thank you for your entry into the following contest: "To Be Put On My Favorites List."
Ted E
PS: Your entry has been blessed by the three wise clappers, but don't spend the whole nine points in one place(lol)!
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what brilliant words spoken in such few sentancees...I truely like this a lot. It has so much meaning and creativitiy behind so few words. Wonderful job poet. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in my contest.
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Nice
A great little message to pass on to others
thank you and very best wishes to you
Julie -
So short!
And I pray for brevity, though I seem to be losing the touch myself. Would it have been better simply to have said 'What hate gains, love tames' ?, even if less accurate?
Neat nano- fragment
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Short, Short, short.
But good.
Thanks for entering.
Sophie
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maybe....... you promise?
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Its a very powerful 6 words. If I had started a 6-word-poem contest, you would be that winner of gold, no doubt
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