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Soft-Spoken Mumbles

Soft-spoken mumbles, pathways to the past
No articulation for fear of recalling better times.
Our gestures, slight and subtle,
Hint at a riddle better left unsolved.

As earth rises to the clouds,
So did our romance culminate.
That space, a chasm between us.
Though I loved you once, no more.


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  • VidaBella17
    August 5
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    Wow. I really enjoyed reading this. Especially the end. Good job!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 18

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    Yes, sometimes those riddles are better left unsolved, for that cannot bridge the chasm! Like where you took this!