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your love is like

your love is like the river
slow and peaceful
it can carry me through so much
you can hold alot of pain and hurt
but only in your life
mine is a total different thing

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  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    July 27

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    A very personal expression of your feelings for someone. It is a lovely poem that accurately reveals your feelings and their depth.


  • LittleMoon silver member
    June 20

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    A very nice little personal write, you should be pleased with it. Sheila