When we first met in the rain that night,
Who would of thought it'd be the fourth of July;
You were everything I ever needed in my life;
Until things began to change, Slowly I started to become rearranged;
And constantly evil thoughts that cross your mind has me wanting to run.
What you are inside on the other hand is an angle with a healing touch.
And I love you so much, more than any word could say;
Well, I've came to the realization letting go is the only way;
Yet anytime you ring my phone; I answer, giving in to your play;
To live with out you is like living for nothing at all.
On the other hand with you girl.
The script you write is drama-filled, with egotistical conversation that appals.
You're fire burning with a passion filled kiss;
As well as a blizzard uncontrollable, and frost that seep in to one's lips;
A deep thinker that looks outside the box;
Idiotic, and crazed when it is unattainable to grab what you want;
Still every-time your devil angle eyes shine;
All that comes to mind is holding you close, and tasting your lips;
I watch from the distance as you shake your hips,
For a seconded I was mesmerized, Till my sanity kicked in;
Love is a strong word... Well so is hate,
Both of them are incapable together.
They just don't relate.
A contest entry
- love me like you hated me....(or should it be)....hate me like you loved me? by JinSays.
400 points, ended July 4, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - JEALOUSY by cazzy71.
888 points, ended August 13, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
You should be able to relate.
Comments
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To live with out you is like living for nothing at all.
On the other hand with you girl.
The script you write is drama-filled, with egotistical conversation that appals.
You're fire burning with a passion filled kiss;
As well as a blizzard uncontrollable, and frost that seep in to one's lips;
A deep thinker that looks outside the box;
Idiotic, and crazed when it is unattainable to grab what you want;
Still every-time your devil angle eyes shine;
Lovely, thank you so much.
Love,
jin -
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Firstly, I love your title. This is very well-expressed, with tons of vivid imagery! The only suggestion I have for you is to make sure that you proofread before posting; too many mistakes can distract the reader, and your words deserve to be heard
Well done & keep it up!
Laura
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