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touch of satin

there lingers in the air
                          a perfume

languidly teasing the senses
                to elicit consumption

raising with pert attention
                  such singular caresses

entangling limbs guiding surcease
                          to imploding emotion

lifting twinned souls beyond
                          inhaling creation

among the flurry of rainbows
                        and touch of satin
                                arranges memory's lock
for opening energies conception

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  • eyesofanangel524
    June 30

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    This is breathtaking. You have written a beautiful piece with captivating lines. Your use of words never ceases to amaze me. IF your pen were a brush you would have put on canvas a picture of awe just as you have done here upon this once blank page...in awe as always my friend..congrats on your metal


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    June 19

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    Sigh...this is really beautifully written. ''flurry of rainbows'' I loved that expression. Wonderfully done!


  • Stardust-luvr
    June 18

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    hun its deff good to see your words of wonder again and I must say your muse returned from its sabatical and touched hearts alive with the pic prompt. i have to admit the imagery brought thoughts to mind. well done and many blessings always xxx