He followed the yellow brick road and
Might have gotten lost along the way
Had he not asked for directions
I'm glad he did because
He found me
He already has a heart
It's just a little bruised
Like my knees
I'll click my heels, hun
Be brave
The witch is dead
And we're not in Kansas anymore.
Author notes
Credit: http://polish-girl.deviantart.com/art/Hearts-126285512
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A contest entry
- Quickie Time. by Cyanide Dreams.
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Honorable mention
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Comments
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I really liked the way that this reflected the prompt and the Wizard of Oz
I loved that movie when I was little, and this brings a whole new light to it - I like the way it adds a few scratches the the shine - great poem!
Polly
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Ooh very nice twist on the
prompt hun! I loved that movie
when I was a kid... and still do!
I like the feel this poem gives
off while reading.. very intriguing,
and beautifully constructed.
Best wishes in the contest
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I love your take on the prompt! Nicely written, best of luck in the contest!
♥ Maria ♥ -
I'm still in Kansas !
haha, what a funny take to the prompt. I liked this. Your imagery is great and the way this read was really good. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Josh
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