Eye sockets mere bruises
Alike to closed fists
Save whole being tangled
In his last rags
All else dissolved-
A fetid morsel of existence
Moves from one ray
Of sun to a new one
Holding time's finger
Rattling his soul
As a broken almbowl
Held by a
Sobbing orphan
Unable to knock open
A deaf world's door
To go out of this life
Conscious how immense
Is oneself without walls.
A contest entry
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410 points, ended July 2, 61 entries
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this is a nice poem
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