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SoMEthing

I can see it
behind those captivating blue eyes
flecked with silver
the ones that hold me
locked in a touchless embrace
I can see it

something

a good something
something to make him smile at me
warm as loving arms
that comfort a saddened spirit
and tender as gentle hands
that brush silken locks of midnight
from my glowing face

something to make me wonder
what thought made those precious gems sparkle
as they gazed across the few feet that spanned between us
as far as the lips of a canyon
and as close as each atom in the smallest molecule

I dare not allow myself to dream
for I may never know
what simple thought
could bring such  radiance
to those stain glass windows
ice blue with flecks of silver

but still I find myself hoping
that it had something
just something
to do with me






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  • Antebellum
    July 10

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    '
    but still I find myself hoping
    that it had something
    just something
    to do with me'

    I can completly relate.
    thanks so much for sharing such a wonderful write.


  • pain is love.
    June 20

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    This is over the line limit. If you message me I will probably keep it in the contest if not you will be DQ sorry.