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Canvas of Love

 

 

clouds kneel on horizon's mist

where crimson streaks haze

and isosceles touch shores

heaving sighs


poised, a feathered flight

seeks refuge within ray

at curtain's call 

as tranquility awes, sight

paints eternity- a blessing

reminding of His Love

 

 



 

 

 



 

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  • FransB gold member
    June 29
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    Thank you

    for the bronze; it is appreciated. Blessings to you. Frans


  • Sandygram
    June 23

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    So Lovely!

    You have penned a beautiful poem. There is nothing more beautiful then His love. It is what all other love is created from within our heart. I do believe with God's love in our hearts, the love we share with others is so much more beautiful because of His love.
    This was a delight to read. Hugs and Smiles.

    Peace and Grace, Sandy


  • myrataal silver member
    June 21

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    When we love ...

    all else seem to be more beautiful, radiant, LOVE-ly. Yes. Love rebirths life, in every way.

    And this is what your poem said to me. In HIS Love our love glows.

    All the best to you, Poet, and especially thinking of you this coming week.

    Love
    Myra


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 21

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    Humm..the poets will never tire of praising the love and its beauty ..wonderful and again I say it is wonderful my friend...


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    June 19

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    What a

    lovely picture you present us with Frans! Your imagery is wonderful, I'm a 'lil perplexed over the isosceles though! Makes me think of Geometry class! How I love poems of nature that reflect on the grandeur of our Creator. All the best in the contest.

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 19
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    Ah..the connectivity and its immages around the words makes this poetry a wonderful reading..love the impact and the beauty..well done...


  • Tqop
    June 18

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    Lovely

    This is outstandingly beautiful. I love how you refered to the sky as crimson. Very beautiful. Continue taking our breath away.

    Evemauy

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