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Silver voice

Listen to my voice,
While you’re sleeping.
I'm singing a gentle song
For the little darling of mine.

Plaid of tunes and words
Is light as a swan’s feather.
Magic of the blinking stars -
The Milky way to the dream.

Smile of the pale moon
Is sweet as a creamy cheese.
Flight of the silver voice is
Landing by the sleepy ears.



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Silver voice of lullaby for my darling

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  • Dryad Enya
    September 14

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    I can't decide whether I should laugh or cry,
    Whether life is right or wrong,
    If what I feel is good or bad
    Maybe the path I stray down,
    Is a test one thing I know

    I love your lullaby.
    Best of luck and thank you so much!
    Dryad Enya


  • SteveS gold member
    August 10

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    This poem definitely has that feeling of standing with closed eyes, swaying in deep thought. Very nice sound to it.


  • Grateful
    July 12
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    it is so sweet and charming!.......i really enjoyed it...all the best..


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    July 11
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    very peaceful, Thanks for sharing

  • Very nice, this very evening I sang one of my grandsons to sleep.
    Peace

  • You've written a lovely lullaby with the moonbeams of your pen—beautiful. The images are creamy and dream-like, and your voice flies on feathers throughout. I think you've sung me to sleep, too, because now I'm ready for a nap....

  • such soft tones that lull, very nicely written x

  • Awe... So Sweet

    Who could not drift peacefully off to dreamland with an angel's sweet voice singing this lullaby

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