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It's the Most Wonderful Time of the Year!

It's the most wonderful time of the year
When the kids are out of school
Home trying to keep cool, it's finally here!
It's the most wonderful time of the year
It's the hap-happiest season of all!
No worries to ponder, of summer grow fonder
'Cause soon comes the fall!
It's the hap-happiest season of all!

The weather turns warm and
The days lose their form and
The rush of the week starts to slow
Camp 'round a warm fire
Your feelings get higher
The wonderful world starts to glow

It's the most wonderful time of the year
For the world is deciding
It's  cheering and chiding
It's finally here!
It's the most wonderful time of the year!

Don't take it for granted
You'll soon be enchanted
You'll soon be so happy and free
The best of the seasons
For many good reasons
It's summer, it's here don't you see?

So amazing, so sublime
To not love summer's a crime
It's the most wonderful time of the year!

Author notes

This is what happens when I get a Christmas Carol stuck in my head in the beginning of summer. I'm finally out of school (aside from 3 hour tests tomorrow and the next day) and I'm almost giddy I'm so happy about it.

If you hadn't figured it out already (which would be really sad) this is a parody of the Christmas carol "It's the Most Wonderful Time of the Year" referring to the summer season rather than the Christmas season. Don't get me wrong, I love Christmas, but it wouldn't be a parody if I didn't change anything, now, would it? Plus, it's June, a Christmas Carol might seem a wee bit out of place.

Thanks to Andy Williams (I think) for originally penning that wonderful song.

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  • C.I.M.A Punk
    July 15

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    I like it. Your version also has the jolly flow.
    The rhyming is nice and the subject is very familiar.

    Good luck!


    • Shrat
      July 15
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      Thanks. It's not too reminiscent of wierd al, but was the only parody I've ever done.


  • A.Joker
    June 24
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    Bravo!

    Ryhme was very significant, flows just as well as the original song, once again bravo!!!


    • Shrat
      June 24
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      Thanks for the comment Asa! How's your summer so far?


      • A.Joker
        June 24

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        Uggh boredom, oh but I did join my old community band. Getting my music tomorrow!!! I'm rlly excited!!

        • Shrat
          June 24
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          That's awesome! I miss Band SO much. That's the only part of next year I can bear the thought of doing again. Best of luck with the music.


  • e911
    June 19

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    Cute...

    I agree though.. sitting here in A/C and humming a Christmas Carol... seems just a little nutty. Very cute and speedy. Funny that you say you are looking forward to relaxing and wrote something that made me feel like you were racing through it. Not my favorite, but certainly very good. Mom

    • Shrat
      June 19
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      Yes, I know...it's really really cheesy...but it was FUN! I'm going to get back to work now. Luv you. *squeeze* bye!

  • Topnotchsy
    June 17

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    I think you are a little nutty Definitely a great time of year, and taking from another festive time is an interesting, creative idea.

    • Shrat
      June 18

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      I'm starting to worry that I might be. Thanks for the comment, maybe soon I can write an actual poem. This is sort of scary. I'm writing silly and you're writing dark...that's a little awry isn't it?

      • Topnotchsy
        June 18
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        One has to wonder...

        I haven't written anything humorous in a while. I'm hoping once my calendar opens up (been insanely busy recently) and I'm more relaxed, I'll get back to writing humor. I think it's always about writing what you are feeling, so if you're feeling humorous, nothing wrong with that.


  • metal4ever
    June 17
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    enjoyable read, great job

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