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Fix Me!

Fix me!
My wires loose,
My head in a spin,
My arm in a tourniquet,
My blood flowing empty
and full of desire.

My heart beating for you,
My soul yearning for you,
My thoughts always with you,
My nerves twitching for you,
My body,
Your temple,
My love.

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  • requiempoet gold member
    June 26
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    Hm. I'm not sure I understand, a poem about a love that you can quite get? Please explain?