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Aborted Baby Landslide

Starts with a girl getting an Abortion
And then of a truck driving off
(another screamo song)

GOING UP THE MOUNTAIN!!
YOU WOULD NEVER HAVE FELT!!!
JUST HOW THOROUGHLY!!
JUSTICE WOULD BE DELT!!!

38,325,000 BABIES SINCE ROE VS. WADE!!!
ALL LAID TO REST ON THAT MOUNTAIN PATH!!!
IT'S TIME FOR YOU TO FEEL GOD'S WRATH!!!

YOU TRIP, FALL
AND HIT THE GROUND!!!
YOU STAND UP SLOWLY
AS TO NOT MAKE A SOUND!!!

YOU HEAR A SOUND!!!
YOU TRY TO IGNORE IT!!!
BUT THE SOUND INTRIGUES YOU!!!
SO YOU GO FOR IT!!!

YOU START RUNNING!!!
AND PASS YOUR TOUR GUIDE!!
THEY RUN THE OTHER WAY!!
YOU ROUND THE CORNER AND SEE...
MURDERED BABY LANDSLIDE!!!!

YOU TURN AROUND!!
AND TRY TO RUN!!!
AS YOU ARE RUNNING YOU TURN!!
AND SEE YOUR SON!!!

COMPLETELY INNOCENT!!
YET YOU STILL KILLED HIM!!!
YOUR CHANCES OF SURVIVING!!
ARE VERY SLIM!!!

AGAIN YOU TRIP!!
THE CORPSES WEIGHT!!
WILL NOW SEAL YOUR FATE!!
YOU WILL SUFFOCATE!!!

MURDERED BABY LANDSLIDE!!!
ANGUISH ETERNALLY ETCHED INTO THEIR EYES!!
THEY DIIIEEED!!!

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Comments

  • I enjoyed this very much indeed. You obviously have a great sense of humour and I always appreciate that. Obviously God is guiding you in your great work. The subtle use of exclamation marks is wonderful. Thank you so much for asking me to read this as it has made me very happy.

  • goalsv
    June 18
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    Very well done. A great message on abortion and a musical tone to it. Nicely done.

  • I like this about as much as I liked your last one, the emotions are strong. I heard this sounding almost like a Demon Hunter song, it was pretty cool.