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Move On

I’ve never been here before.
I don’t see anything I recognise.
I found my way to your door.
Couldn’t believe the sight that met my eyes.

Didn’t think I’d take it so badly.
But I was shaken much to my surprise.
Did I really make you so lonely?
Well it’s just like you to always criticise.

This time I know it’s really over.
I’ve finally got some sense of closure.
So…
Don’t go thinking,
That I’m still thinking,
About you baby,
Thinking that maybe,
I’ll take you back,
Well forget that,
Cause’ I’ll move on!
Ba bada dada, Ba bada dada, Ba bada da, whoa oh oh.

I thought I saw you behind me.
Watching closely every step I take.
Help there’s a stalker behind me!
This time it’s over, this is not a break.

I’ve really tried to make this work.
I’ve been so genuine but you’re so fake.
Don’t care if you say that you’re hurt.
Not being fooled, not making that mistake.

You need to know it’s really over.
You’ve got to find some sense of closure.
So…
Don’t go thinking,
That I’m still thinking,
About you baby,
Thinking that maybe,
I’ll take you back,
Well forget that,
Cause’ I’ll move on!

Don’t be worried,
About my worries,
Cause’ I don't care,
And I'm not worried.
Don’t be calling,
I won’t ring back,
So just move on!

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Shadedgrey - Big segment of one of my songs. Like with my poetry i prefer rhyme in my lyrics. This song has a fast, bouncy, jazzy tune, Hope you like it!

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  • Ami
    June 20

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    Nice I only write in rhyme and I mostly write lyrics
    This lyric was Amazing! the chorus seems Really catchy
    do you sing your own stuff? and what style do you do?
    anyway Great write! -♥Amy♥


  • Poetrist
    June 20

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    Really nice and enjoyable. I loved the rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing


  • xtremepoet
    June 19

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    Well written

    I think you did a great job on this. Rather short as it is for a song, but I don't know how you add in the music or repeat any lines. I like the name too, it really fits the song. And just as you do, I like to have rhyme in my poetry and lyrics too. But anyway, it was very enjoyable to read, and flowed through really well.

    Xtremepoet

  • liberation is a sweet salvation meant for the soul. When you find yourself actually able to let go and move on...sweet is the day!! Great writing here. the reader feels engaged on a persojnal level...thanks for sharing...peace and light, kp


  • sezzy
    June 18

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    so relateble

    well written and spot on well penned my friend !
    oh my i have so been here ouch ! that read actually really touched my heart so glad you shared it


  • Zia-
    June 18

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    Taking a stand

    Finally taking a stand that is how it comes across.... no more bullshit i like it...

    good job

  • Excellent

    'tis a very fine write, indeed. You have expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • jessica2009
    June 17
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    i liked t. poor girl tho lol gd job


    • shadedgrey
      June 17
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      Ha typical, never thought about it from that view point. You're supposed to feel bad for me being chased by my crazy ex lol.x

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