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Tonight you're on my mind

Tonight you're the
girl on my mind.
                      Rewind to us.
Baby,
                      We cant forget,
And let beauty get to us.
Its
  Not
        to
          late.
(To lust)
To let love grab us.
Struggle,
            Hold
                    on.
Grow .

          push past;

                        This Hourglass.   

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  • Little Brat
    September 21
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    sounds like a song

  • SleepyShelly
    June 17

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    This is so great! I love how the words just reach out at grap all of my attention and the rythem that goes with them! Thanks for sharingI I really enjoy your work!


    • XXXFlipperXXX
      June 17
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      Haha thanks again i just finished editing i really appreciate the support