Tears soak my pillow every night you're gone.
My shattered heart breaks further when seeing you.
Today was the last time I heard your beautiful voice.
You and I will never cross paths again; agony rips through me.
A pathetic mess lays splattered with my blood-stained tears.
I have no feelings of anything anymore; I'm just numb.
Those blue eyes will haunt me until forever is over.
That happy smile of yours all that kept my pain and teardrops at bay.
Goodbyes hurt me, especially when they're permanent.
Your kind words I will never forget, but always remember.
When the rain comes, it replaces my tears, which shed to no end.
Now you're gone, your shadow dimming as you get farther away....
What words I want to speak I never did weigh me down with regret.
Never again to feel your strong embrace, keeping me safe from harm.
Your laughter, like that of bells, my ears will never again register.
A fiery torture released on my heart and mind, suffocating my points of reason.
My nightmare has broadened its horizons, bringing you into the deadly game.
Weakness and vulnerability replace my strength and calmness I once possessed.
Everyday that passes without you in my life numbs me to the core all the more.
My secrets to you I would reveal when we crossed pathways again one day soon.
Take care of yourself my friend....I'll miss you like crazy.
Author notes
This is dedicated to my friend Cody, the one who managed to capture my heart, but will soon be gone.
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I really like the fourth stanza.. Thats may fave. Great write and good luck!
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thanks! glad you liked it!
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a fiery loss you describe in your writes, very well done, thank you for entering
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thank you! glad you liked it!
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Compelling
"My nightmare has broadened its horizons, bringing you into the deadly game." Introspection is healthy.
Howard
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thank you! glad you enjoyed it!
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A touching raw edge meets me with this write of yours
A friend or lover but the ending spoke
Best wishes and thanks for sharing
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thanks!
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AWESOME
Just amazing,no more words needed.100/100. I rate this very highly. -
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lol thank you cazzy!
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Weakness and vulnerability replace my strength and calmness I once possessed.
Everyday that passes without you in my life numbs me to the core all the more.
These lines are very nice. I think this poem could have down with more imagery and metaphor. But thank-you very much for entering my contest. Good luck.
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Amazing
I Loved It But It Was Very Sad
I love This Paragraph/Stanza Or What Ever XD
My nightmare has broadened its horizons, bringing you into the deadly game.
Weakness and vulnerability replace my strength and calmness I once possessed.
Everyday that passes without you in my life numbs me to the core all the more.
My secrets to you I would reveal when we crossed pathways again one day soon
I Dont Know Why I Just Love It
Good Workk Babee
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thanks! i'm glad you liked this piece.
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Okay, you need a new boy megan
it helps ... I know 
hahaha. And this is soooo sad ..... But i want to buy you a boy-bandaid that will heal your heart.. lol. As gay as that sounds i want you to feel better! Because i know this pain all to well ! And i want to throw up thinking about it !
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lol yes ik i do. and NO u wanting to bandage my heart don't sound gay; it sounds like someone who genuinely cares and wants to help. As I said in my recent journal entry, if I wrote any more, they'd probably be sad. This poem helped me to get some of my emotions out, which was why I wrote it.
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Awwh, well them im so glad wrting this helped, because i could feel your desperate pain, turning to ice :[ i know all to well... But yes i want to encase your heart in rainbows adnd fairys! and ice cream! lmao... -mmm,, ice cream- lol
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nice one sis. Yeah....srry about you havin' to feel what i feel; i hate it when i make others sad. lol encasing my heart with fairies and ice cream sounds dandy!
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pfft! don't you dare forget the rainbows!!! they are so important, they bring color to the pain greyness!
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aaaaaaawwwwwwww
girly i'm sorry what happened?
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i do remember what you said. this was something i found out before i talked to you. if you must know, I'm never going to see him again. He's leaving for two years, and that means he won't be at school for junior or senior year. He's a really good friend of mine too.
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